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Monday, September 23, 2013
100 word challenge pot of legs
One day there was a red talking pot with big white teeth his eyes where bright yellow. Staring at every one that walked past, big silver legs coming out of his head. Every day 100s of people walk past and stare at his face children saying that he is awesome and cool colours. The pots best comment was he is so totally awesome. Some days he feels jealous because he wants to be a human but a magic man turned him into a pot. Magic man was very evil.


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Logan, I like the way you framed this response. I am very curious about Magic Man and why he is so unpleasant? I love your learning portfolio as well - great work!
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Year 6 Teacher
Adelaide, Australia